Hey look man, my name's "I-smel". What I lack in smarts, I at least pay back in honesty. Boink!
Age 33, Male
England, MAN-CHESTer
Joined on 3/2/06
Posted by I-smel - October 22nd, 2007
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/091107 /52671_FUCKIN_UNIFINISHED_QUEST.php
Want to help me improve on the style of this? Tell me if there's any effects I should add. How should I change the Heads Up Display? Is there a better way I could do the GO symbol? How can I make it more FUCKIN AWESOME? Stuff like that I want to look alot smoother and cleaner and clearer, but keep the AWESOME style.
Fixt
It does look really awesome. I don't really like the health bar wrapping half circle around the characters head. The "go" sign should be bigger and more in the center.
The character should have a plaid shirt. And hopefully some enemies will have hair, unless theres a crazy story-line.
Nice work! It's looking good. The enemies are animated quite well.
The space bar attack looks pretty damn sweet. I think the animation that plays when theres no-one around to grab should be changed. He looks like he is playing paper scissors rock.
In terms of effects - I think you should make everything have more weight. At the moment the MovieClips seem to be floating. Some simple particle effects for hits and some hitTests should do the trick.
Otherwise I reckon you just keep working on it. You'll find that the style will refine naturally as you work on it.
Url not found?
It's hosted on NGup.net
That site's bein haxxord right now though =/
The wall at the end needs to be the boundary. I somehow hit the big guy and he went into the blue and I couldn't follow him. When you pick up a broken stool it disappears and your arms are stuck in the air. Would prefer if he could move faster and be able to walk and punch at the same time. Would also like to be able to pick up tables and chairs instead of just enemies and stools.
ElMicha
umm, theres nothing in the link...